Monday, February 6, 2012

My poetry

Poetry is
Poetry is the bridge between creativity and your thoughts.
It allows you to mix your felings and interests with your fantisies and wishes.

What happens when summer turns into fall
When the wind breaks out and the leaves start to change we blow the dust off of our coats and put them on, but we continue with our daily lives.
But what about the other animals?
Do the animals hate the wind freezing the wind on their face?
Do they appreciate the beauty of the changing leaves? Or do they go on with their daily lives like us, walking past the beauty of fall?

Michelangelo and David 
 You both started out young your experience and age not a factor.
You both aspired to greatness early,you did your job well you were a master an expert at what you did you were praised by the highest and most respected. That is why you are together, it is because you are so alike so powerful yet so young.

2 comments:

  1. Nice poem, especially the 2 one. I liked it because you made me wonder about the difference between humans and animals in the fall and how animals might feel during the fall

    ReplyDelete
  2. I agree with Jacob on how you tell how the animals might feel.

    ReplyDelete